BIRDS SOARING HIGH IN THE SKIES,
FLY TOGETHER COME BACK AT NIGHT,
SEEM DIFFERENT BUT ARE ALIKE.
FLOWERS BLOSSOMING IN YOUR BACKYARD LEFT AND RIGHT,
ONE SEEMS MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN OTHER YET ALL ALIKE.
TREE BEARING FRUITS IN CARE & LIGHT,
ONE IS SOUR & OTHER SWEET YET ARE ALIKE.
HUMAN BEINGS OF THE SAME SPECIES ONE IS REJOICING
OTHER CRYING AT HIS PLIGHT,
THEY ALSO SEEM DIFFERENT BUT ARE ALIKE.
TEARS TRICKLE DOWN FROM THE ELOQUENT EYES,
PEOPLE MAYBE DIFFERENT BUT EMOTIONS ARE ALIKE.
SO WHY SIT BACK & STRIVE,
LET LOOSE FOR A WHILE,
LET LOOSE FOR A WHILE,
AND DO THINGS WHICH ARE NOT ALIKE !
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this is such a beautiful.....(read BEAUUUUTTTIIIFUUUULLL)poem......i hv cum across in a veryy long time.ts sumthn like evry1 feelz ds way bt u kn actually put t down in words....gud goin
\/peace
thnx nymphetamine its just me beautyfool scrobbling down buh u write far morw bettr......im an amatuer........
although im usually not 2 gud understandin poems but i find ur poem so guuuuuuuuudddddd......it reminds me of soo much....all the past....amazingly written....exellent imagination
@nikita
well niks thnx....well thnx fr strainin ur brain in understandin ma poem...lols...i thought im alone feelin da same..now i hav company...:P
may i ask you...what actually inspired u 2 write this piece??
@niks
Well noticing all da lyf forms while just lyin in my lawn...lyfs pretty mundane n beautiful buh dere r sm things dat instigates me....we r all da same but still we r inflictin smthings..which r ludicrous...so dat hurts me.....
gud gud...ur observation is smthn most of us come across but do nthn abt it...so its gud that ur doin smthin abt it....
I wud like to disagree.. nothing is alike not even two roses are alike.
Similarity is a delusion, difference is reality.
Again this is just what i think.
tc
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